Improvements needed to be made before deadline

From all our feedback we gathered helpful opinions about our music video. As mentioned in other blogs we came to a joint decision to remove the footage of Stephane infront of the starry backdrop using the projector, as many people who watched our music video said it did not fit in with the rest of the video, as the rest of the video is all shot outside and in the dark, unlike this scene where stephane was inside. Our feedback was more positive than negative, so there was not that much to improve on. Mary did suggest that we add more slow motion clips to make the video more visually pleasing, we did that, and it has infact made our video look and flow better.
We conducted a questionnaire using the emelemnts of mise en scene to see what fellow students had to say about our music video, here's what they had to say;